Incorrect Paraphrasing

Public outrage at the death of Sherlock Holmes in "The Final Problem" was immediate. Women wept, men wore crepe mourning bands in their hats, and in a letter to the author, a reader addressed him as "You Brute!"

This is incorrect because, though a few words have been changed (in red) or omitted, most of it is still written the way Tibbetts wrote it. It also doesn't cite The Encyclopedia of Novels into Film.

Outrage at the death of Sherlock Holmes in "The Final Problem," published in 1893, was immediate. Women cried, men wore black bands in their hats, and in a letter to Doyle, a reader addressed him as "You Brute!" (Tibbetts, 184). This is still incorrect, even though it has a citation at the end and changes Tibbetts’ words more than the first example does (changes shown in red). However, it still uses a lot of Tibbetts' original wording without correct attribution.